Is this Essay Powerful Enough to win an ESA Scholarship?

College Essays
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<p>Hello,</p>

<p>I'm currently applying for the ESA scholarships (which are due tomorrow), but I've just finished this essay. Will anyone care to give it a quick read and give some comments? Although I would like to avoid 09ers applying for scholarships, anyone is welcome to read as long as they can do it by today or tomorrow (preferably ASAP). </p>

<p>Thanks,</p>

<p>Forti</p>

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<p>I'll quick read it, I'm an 09'er but I'm not applying to the scholarships of which you speak. E-mail at <a href="mailto:xgreatescapex@yahoo.com">xgreatescapex@yahoo.com</a> or PM.</p>

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<p>pm it over</p>

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<p>If you PM me, I will send you my email address and will give comments. Not applying to that scholarship.</p>

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<p>Bump! Take my words back, anyone can read this as long as they can give critique in a few hours.</p>

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<p>PM me if you'd like and I'll try to turn it around fast</p>