Last chance to revise my essay

<p>Hey, hello everyone, new here.</p>

<p>I know the deadline is near, and I am still struggling with a proper common essay - this sounds silly, indeed</p>

<p>so can anyone (Junior Member or above) take a look at my essay and give some advice?</p>

<p>Your help will be GREATLY appreciated !</p>

<p>no one wants to take a look?</p>

<p>Sure, PM me if you'd like to trade?</p>

<p>Oh, I know I'm not a junior member, but I used to be LaLaLa12345, but I changed my email on that account, and now I can't get in and post on that account anymore..</p>

<p>hi, i'm not a junior member - but i really want someone to review mine. If you're interested, drop me a pm and we can trade. </p>

<p>mine is on this topic:Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.</p>

<p>i ll do it if you like</p>