<p>I think thats a bad thing, so can anyone critique it for me?</p>
<p>i will! pm me it</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>
<p>i'll critique but i can't promise i'll edit grammar. lol</p>
<p>I'll give it a shot! PM me!</p>
<p>I'll give it a shot too! I'm bored.</p>
<p>pm me ill check it out</p>
<p>I would like to read it because I am in that exact situation right now and reading yours might help me figure out how to fix mine!</p>
<p>Sure, I'd love to. Give me a PM</p>
<p>I know what you mean...
PM me;)</p>
<p>hmmm yea. PM me =)</p>