Please tell me if this essay is good or complete garbage, I'm freaking out! :-)

Applying to College
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<p>Well I don't think its -complete- garbage. But I just dont know if it's up to par. Any help would be great!</p>

<p>:-)</p>

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<p>yea send it to me</p>

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<p>Peeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Eeeeeeeeeeeem Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeh.</p>

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<p>thanks guys, any other takers?</p>

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<p>pm me and in your pm, also if you could add what colleges youre applying to with this essay.</p>

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<p>I'll love to look at it! I just finished with mine...and man was it hard work!!!</p>

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<p>Sure, PM me too.</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>me too! pm it over =]</p>

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<p>illl look it over, pm me!</p>

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<p>pm me, i'll read it</p>

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<p>If you think i'm an ok person, I dont mind giving some second opinions.</p>

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<p>Ill read that old bean</p>

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<p>If you still need someone, I can look over it.</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>i'd love to help!</p>

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<p>ill look at it</p>

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<p>ill look at it</p>

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<p>lol if you need anyone else (probably not :D ) Pm me!</p>

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<p>I'll check it out. PM.</p>