<p>nyu is my ultimate dream school. i have done extensive research on the school and feel that i am an excellent candidate. however, because my heart is set on it so dearly i would really like to hear an outside opinion that isn't my parent's or my friend's. i am really relying on my activities and essay because i feel that they are what really set me apart from other applicants. my academics are above average, but i wouldn't say outstanding. i applied to CAS as an undecided major. here's a breakdown:</p>
<p>my grades have consistently improved throughout high school. i had a lot of problems in 9th grade and was sent to boarding school where i earned Bs and Cs. 10th i improved with all As and Bs and my junior year i got all As and 1 B in both honors and AP classes. it is also important to note that my first boarding school did not offer honors or AP courses and lacked a foreign language department, and i included this information in my application. i am currently taking honors and AP classes. my gpa is about a 3.7 and i have been part of the national honor society since junior year.</p>
<p>my SAT scores are average, but that is because i really do not do well on standardized tests (the whole sitting for 3 hours, attention span etc.) and my best section is writing, which doesn't even count. my scores are as follows in critical reading/math/writing/essay</p>
<p>660/520/650/8
650/520/710/12
650/570/650/8</p>
<p>now on to my activities. i have been involved with volunteer work for more than 3 years ranging from volunteering at pet shelters to working with students on conflict resolution. i am part of my high school's schools for schools club which fundraises for the invisible children in uganda, and i have made many donations on my own time as this is something i am really passionate about. i have traveled abroad on student trips to both costa rica, where i stayed for 5 weeks and lived with a tico family, and france and england as a student ambassador. my other activities include french club, yearbook committee and working as a columnist for the school newspaper. i have held a steady p/t job throughout high school, and even worked 2 p/t jobs at one point during my senior year.</p>
<p>please share your thoughts! this is really the most important part of my life so far, i will be utterly heartbroken if i am not accepted. also... i do not know if this is important, but my dad is the vice president of a large company that has many close ties to NYU. he has personal acquaintances with NYU staff, and could influence my admission. i know it may feel like i couldn't get into NYU on my own, but it's not like he's buying my way in because i am still a very good student without his help! it's just an extra boost i guess.</p>