Need thoughts on my Stanford short essay please!

Virtually all of Stanford’s undergraduates live on campus. Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate — and us — know you better. (100 to 250 words)

If you have the time to read it and tell me what you think, I would really appreciate it!

if you want i’ll read it but in fair disclosure I am applying to Stanford too. My own note is pretty good IMO so I won’t steal your info.

keep it simple and honest. don’t make it very showy or quirky, that all they want…from what i know

I’m happy to give it a read! I am not applying to Stanford XD

I’d be happy to read it! I applied EA and was deferred, so idk how much my advice is worth, but happy to do it!

sent it to you guys, thanks again!