Please review my Stanford essay!

College Essays
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<p>Hello I wrote my essay for Stanford. The prompt is: Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate — and us — know you better. (100 to 250 words). Please message me if you want to read it because I do not want to post it and have people steal my essay. And do not be afraid to criticize; I know I am a bad writer! Thank you!</p>

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<p>Hi I’d be glad to help you out with your essay!</p>

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<p>Sure. Send it to me. </p>

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Wait…Aren’t they both SCEA schools? That says a lot about your lack of ethics.</p>

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<p>I can take a look!</p>

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@GMTplus7 are ethics the only thing keeping people from applying to multiple places early (in the case of SCEA)? I’m surprised we haven’t figured out a better way hahahaha

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i can take a look! :slight_smile:

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I’d love to help as well!