Stanford's more creative essay... mine needs a critique badly!

<p>Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. What would you want your future roommate to know about you? Tell us something about you that will help your future roommate -- and us -- know you better.</p>

<p>Please let me know if you'll be willing to read it! I've only shown it to my parents and they think it's OK.. they wanted me to talk more about my international-ness but I feel like that's been MORE than covered in the rest of my application. I wanted to focus on a more light-hearted, less academic, HUMAN side of me, and I hope that comes through.</p>

<p>PM me if you want to. I’ve already finished my application so don’t worry.</p>

<p>I’ll read. I already sent my app in, by the way.</p>

<p>finished my app. pm.</p>

<p>Thanks so much guys =)</p>