<p>I kind of BSed the entire thing but I used some big words and filled both pages. Hopefully that will get me a 10+ (as it usually does)...as for examples I used Huck Finn and MLK</p>
<p>identity is created by individual-hester prynne and jay gatsby</p>
<p>identity is created by individuals.. i c/c'ed scarlet o'hara and melanie wilkes (Gone With The Wind), got me a 12 last time so hopefully a repeat or an 11 ..</p>
<p>identity: personal experince...and racism?...looking back that was really dumb.</p>
<p>I wrote on Dickens' Hard Times and current Supreme Court Justice Clarence Thomas, and filled both pages (and my vocabulary was ridiculous)..I'm really hoping for a 12</p>
<p>Identity:
Giuseppe Garibaldi creating the Italian identity
James McBride's The Color of Water</p>
<p>I used the whole two pages. :D</p>
<p>Sister Carrie and Fahrenheit 451</p>
<p>Originality: related an endless string of a variety ideas to proteins and how they are only made up of 20 amino acids but from those 20 there comes an infinite variety of proteins. secondly i talked about the founding fathers and how they had to come up with an entirely new form of government, related to how there can be both variations on the same idea and new ideas that have yet to be imagined</p>
<p>Celebrites and Heroes...</p>
<p>Examples used David Beckham and Gandhi.....Britney Spears and Mother Teresa...
Hope to get minimum 5</p>
<p>haha i used Britney Spears and Mother Teresa tooo</p>
<p>Identity</p>
<p>Gatsby, To Kill A Mockingbird, A Doll's House.</p>
<p>I had identity and said it was earned by experiences or whatever. I used The Kite Runner, Lyndon Johnson's "Great Society", Barack Obama...</p>
<p>Don't ask me how haha</p>
<p>i had identity. I used America during the revolutionary war, America becoming a world power, and blacks throughout American history.</p>
<p>God my essay must have sucked
I only wrote about a personal experience
how it felt to be a traditional Chinese girl and yet still create my own broad identity
I elaborated and such
but...
still I should've used more examples
but I ran out of time</p>
<p>originality, and about Thomas edison and how the lightbulb was not original and such, and then the evolution of weapons like how the gun came from flintlock, from matchlock, from gunpowder and fireworks, from grounded rock and spear and sword from a elongated knife from a sharp rock, from dull rock, from picking up a dull rock that resembled a fist, from fist. lol hope that second one works</p>
<p>i had the heroes and celebrities one- i used paris hilton and naomi campbell and mahatma gandhi- got an 8- why couldn't i get the identity one #######</p>
<p>haha i was the second post.. .the identity one... i got a frikin 6 -_-</p>
<p>i'm scared
my essay topic wasn't the same as yours
do SAT have different topics on one test date?
i'm not taking it in the US</p>
<p>oh,, i didn't take sat on oct...i forgot.....</p>
<p>ok.. i thought.. i wrote an amazing essay. I only used two examples and used vocab words like none other.. and still I got an 8...</p>