Decision: Deferred - ED
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): didn’t send
ACT (breakdown): 35 (Science: 35, Reading: 36, English: 36, Math: 34)
SAT II: didn’t send
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.92
Weighted GPA: 4.69
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 26% or something
AP (place score in parenthesis): APUSH(5), Biology(4), Psychology(5), World History(4), Eng Lit(4), Euro(5)
IB (place score in parenthesis): SL Chem(4 + war flashbacks; I swear I’m not a bad student), SL Math(5)
Senior Year Course Load:
IB HL Biology
AP Calc AB
IB HL History of Americas
IB HL English
IB SL Spanish
TOK
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): AP Scholar with Distinction, that’s pretty much it.
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):
(Founder/President) Model UN
(Founder/President) Health Occupations Students of America
(President) Science National Honors Society
(Vice President) Modern Music Master’s
Participated in Spanish Honors Society, National Honors Society, National Arts. Didn’t put it on my app though.
Job/Work Experience:
Private tutoring
Volunteer/Community service:
(Director) Non-profit that collects donations for rural Chinese primary school and sends pen pal letters to and from America/China.
(Organizer) Local tutoring at a karate dojo.
Hospital shifts every week.
Summer Activities: Traveled around the world.
Essays (rating 1-10, details):
CommonApp(9)- Wrote about the Great Firewall of China and how my small actions make a difference on the mentalities of Chinese prejudice. Hopefully it’ll fall one day. I thought it was pretty creative.
Supplements:
Why Brown?(6) - talked about research and the activist community and Bruno the bear. (yeah not the best)
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
Didn’t read any of these so it’s a guess.
Teacher Rec #1: Biology (8): known for her great rec letters. Had her class for 2 years.
Teacher Rec #2: History(8): awesome teacher who’s super down to earth - he really likes me. Had his class for 2 years.
Counselor Rec(6): I submitted a questionnaire that answered a bunch of questions for the counselor to write off of. Didn’t read it, plus we met only a couple of times but I’m sure it was adequate.
Additional Rec: none
Interview: lasted ~45 minutes, although I feel like I connected to the interviewer on a superficial level (it was on the phone). We talked about Brown life and such. Didn’t really click but overall not bad. (Not good either)
Other:
Applied for Financial Aid?: No
Intended Major: Biology
State (if domestic applicant): FL
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: Public school; a bit rural if anything
Ethnicity: Asian
Gender: F
Income Bracket: <$100,000
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): ???
Reflection:
Strengths: Hard stats were not bad I guess. It’s probably what got me not rejected.
Weaknesses: Perhaps the supplement essays. LOL I looked back at one and realized there a typo. I did a lot of research on Brown but I don’t think I adequately conveyed it in my writing.
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: No major awards and possibly my race. Having those objective stats is extremely common among east Asians, so I’m sure the school barely glanced at my app. I also think these things are a crapshoot and I just got an unlucky draw.
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected: accepted to OSU, my back-up’s back-up.
General Comments:
Do I really want to get into college? Instead of finishing the rest of my college apps (after Brown’s nice early-Christmas gift of a deferral) I’m scouring College Confidential. Maybe I should just take a gap year.
In all seriousness, my hard stats are pretty good but I think it came down to how I looked overall. On paper I seem like an all-around student instead of a spiked one, but that’s pretty much because I find so many things interesting. Ah well, congrats to all that got in and hopefully I have the motivation to type out 10 more essays!