<p>Apps for the UCs, as many of you know, are due tomorrow! I'd appreciate any last minute feedback on my essays if any of you can provide it! Both can be found here:</p>
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<p>And I'm sure no one will do it, but please don't copy. My essays are garbage and plagiarism will only screw us both over.</p>
<p>And ugh, if you're going to just spy on it and check out the competition or whatever, at least post something. Thank you guys! ^_^</p>
<p>i find the second topic quiet clich</p>
<p>Yes, I agree. I couldn’t think of anything else. I did try to put a spin on it with not choosing to fit in with the crowd or whatever, but ohwell…</p>
<p>Are you going to trim a bit? I see you are over the word count.</p>
<p>I have a pet peeve of people saying 'I’m not a concert pianist" etc. because it is so overdone and we already know you aren’t because it isn’t on your EC list.</p>
<p>I wonder why it was a mistake to search for teach piano? not understanding…</p>
<p>oops you have pulled it so that’s the end of my comments.</p>
<p>Overall a decent job. I liked the 2nd one. The first one isn’t a great topic but it’s okay. Good luck.</p>
<p>edit to add: the 2nd one is interesting to me because you actually tried to do something that few people would in getting that book. And your analysis of the results is good.</p>
<p>Thank you for pointing that out Brown Parent, I shouldn’t be using cliches anyway. It was a mistake because it was a keyboard and not a piano, lol. My friend told me to take it down o_o Too many randoms lurking she said.</p>