<p>I decided to do a topic of my choice, which is "Second Chances". I'm assuming it's not safe to post your essays here, so I will be glad to PM it to you. But I need honest critique and feedback .. minor or major. How can it be improved? What are the biggest strengths in the essay? Weaknesses/Holes that need to be filled? Overall thoughts? That would be great. I really want to work hard on my college essay and revise it in the best way that I can. If you would like to read it and give feedback, that would be great. Just post if you want to read it, I will PM it to you ASAP. Thank you very much.</p>
<p>I’d be happy to take a look at it, pm me.</p>
<p>can anyone else give it a read?</p>
<p>can you read mine if i read yours?
im a senior though. pm me if you want.</p>
<p>I just sent my comm app so I can edit yours. Just send it overr :)</p>
<p>I would like to give your essay an honest review…I would also appreciate it if you could quickly look over my essay.</p>
<p>I’d be happy to critique your essay.
PM or e-mail: <a href=“mailto:NKunkel@ucsd.edu”>NKunkel@ucsd.edu</a></p>