Please critique my UC prompts!

<p>UC applications are due this week! I would really appreciate it if anyone can critique my personal statements. Please comment and I'll PM my essays to you. Criticism is welcome! :)</p>

<p>PROMPT #1: Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

<p>PROMPT #2: Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>