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<p>Fame brings happiness in people. Several examples from history clearly demonstrate that fame is consequential.</p>

<pre><code>Through the actions of Hayao Miyazaki, all his fans can be inspired by how he found happiness in becoming the greatest animation director of all time. In the 1960's, Hayao barley was able to get a job after graduating from Guaksuin University. He received degrees in political science and economic. Furthermore, he realized that he had to depend on his skills in animation to get him a job. This resulted in his employment of the worst animation studio in Japan—Toei studios. At the place, he was under paid, very hungry, and wasn’t able to leave until he was done with all his work. However, after years of being so mistreated, he and his buddy Isap Takahata decided to open up studio Ghibli. The studio allowed him to create animated films that he always dreamed about making. Also, had a cult following that brought upon his fame. Thus, fame made Hayao far happier than being not famous.

As demonstrate by Bill Gates, Microsoft lovers everywhere know that fame brings happiness. In the late 1970's, Bill Gate decided to dropout of Harvard University. As a result, he had to move in with his parents in Seattle Washington. Back at home, Bill Gates wasn’t able to get a job, all his childhood friends were still in school, and he had no money. However, he had a goal to start his own computer company and with the aid of his parents he was able to create Microsoft. Never agin in his life had he ever had to live with his parents. Furthermore, he got married and has a mansion in Texas. Thus, Bill Gates found most of his glee with fame.

Through the actions of Olaudah Equaino, all his admirers realized that the slave narrative he wrote brought his happiness. During his time as a public speaker, many of his friends though it would be a judicious idea for him to write a book. He took their criticism and for five months he did that. The book was published in 1775 and was an instant hit. It was the direct cause for his fortune and fame. Furthermore, he was able to do everything that he ever dreamed of no peace on the planet was off limits as he could travel anywhere he wanted. Also, he was able to accomplish his desire to help people in Sierra Leone. Thus, the fame and fortune that his autobiography gave him were the reason for his happiness. After a life of pain and happiness he found peace.

After a critical analysis of Olaudah Equaino, Hayao, and Bill Gates fame indeed makes people happy. Had Olaudah, Hayao, and Bill not proven this, millions of people would not be inspired by them.
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