<p>please grade my practice test essay:</p>
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<p>PROMPT: What motivates people to change?</p>
<pre><code> "People always change" is a common expression heard time and again. However, the reasons for this are less obvious. Since the dawn of time, man has continually driven himself at reform. In literature, characters are usually dynamic. In history, men have always been motivated to change. I have undergone the phases of reform countless times as well. Men are motivated to change because they constantly seek better conditions and an easier lifestyle.
In the book Animal Farm by George Orwell, the pig Napoleon repeatedly announces "decrees" which promote his well-being. For example, one of the decrees grants Napoleon the right to sleep in a bed, while the other animals must rest in decrepit stalls, disclosing man's innate motivation to change: their desire for an easier state of life.
Several paradigms of man's urge to reform occur in history as well. For example, King Louis and Queen Marie-Antoinette of pre-revolution France passed a slew of laws which made their lives all the more luxiorious. Marie Antoinette was a complete spendthrift; laws allowed her to deplete the treasury as she desired. King Louis was a voracious eater and laws permitted him to eat as much as he desired whilst the rest of France starved. King Louis and Marie-Antoinette passed laws which guaranteed them a superior and larger-than-life way of living. These examples again outline man's inclination towards change: his vicious goal of gaining a better life.
In my life, I have reformed countless times. When I had sports after school last year, I would walk home everyday after practice. Eventually, I learned to take the bus, breaking my habit of walking. To attain an easier life, I changed myself. This demonstrates man's tendency to change -- his burning lust for a toil-free and less arduous rhythm of life.
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