Please help me with my UC personal statement. I need advice!

<p>I was wondering if a well-respected poster can read and comment on my essay---and handle it through e-mail.</p>

<p>I know UC Admissions can look up this website if i post my personal statement here and would rather handle this privately and not ruin my chances of pursuing higher education</p>

<p>Thank you so much for even reading this, and if you are contemplating private messaging me you're email, I will even pay to have advice given. </p>

<p>Please help me someone and private message me!
Thanks and regards :)</p>

<p>please it will take 5 minutes of your time to read the 2 prompt responses and just quickly give your impression/advice on the matter, like i said i will pay you for this if you require it. i want someone who is a good writer and knows a lot about personal statements.</p>

<p>i thought this forum was supposed to help you with college admissions, 100 viewers already and not one willing to help me with just advice/constructive criticism, i have it written already just really need outside expertise. i will give it a day before bumping my post up but this is urgent</p>

<p>I can read it!</p>

<p>ok thank you so much btw, can you just send me an e-mail college confidential doesnt give new users the right to message anyone if you don’t post 15 messages on forums. my email is whelweh23@**********. also sent you a friend request not sure if that would enable me to send you my personal statements.</p>

<p>gmail wow this site wont even let me reveal my own email…never going to come here for college advice again thanks a lot guys</p>