Please Rate My Essay

College Essays
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I just finished my second essay for a scholarship, and would love to have some input. It’s fairly personal. I hate writing about myself, so I don’t really think it’s great – hopefully that doesn’t scare you away. Looking for people with a fairly high post-count.

Prompt: Describe the factors that have most shaped your personal life and aspirations. How did they allow you to grow?
Word Count: 799/800 (for now)

I also wrote another essay about changing my community if you have the time to do both.
Prompt: What would you change about your community and why?
Word Count: 467/500

Thanks in advance!

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I’m willing to read it, but idk if I have a high post count

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Haha, I trust you. I’ll PM ya.

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Could anybody else give their opinions?

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Yup…I’ll take a look :smiley:

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Looking for someone with a high-post count. Sorry!

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bump

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I’d love to get one last reader in before I submit!

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they’re great reads, everyone! (:
won’t take too much time, and are good examples of well written, unique essays, in my opinion

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My mom is a college counselor I can ask her to take a look.

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Stepmom

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Thanks for the offer, but everyone on here says not to share with low-count profiles. Sorry!

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bump

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I will look at it if you still want a reader. PM me.