please read my essay?

College Essays
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<p>It's not much of an essay, just wanted to make sure I was able to get my point accross/if this needed more editing.</p>

<p>It's the common app extracurricular "essay"; I wrote about how teaching kids flute influenced me to want to become some kind of teacher/professor in the future. I'll send it to you if you post here :)</p>

<p>My questions are: although I don't explicitly state that I want to become some kind of teacher or professor in the future, do you still get that feeling from the essay? and is it good? X) anything I should discuss further/less?</p>

<p>Thanks! :)</p>

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<p>Sure, I don’t mind reading it. Just pm me it :)</p>

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<p>thank you so much! :slight_smile: is there anyone else willing to help me out?
(a disguised bump post)</p>

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<p>I love reading other people’s writing! I’d be more than happy to read your essay and give you feedback :)</p>