<p>Hey! I really need some critique on my common app essay (#5).
Please be as brutal and honest as you can, even if it means that I need to start over.
I will probably use this as my UC personal statement as well. </p>
<p>Comment, and Ill PM you the essay!
THANKS!</p>
<p>i’ll read it!</p>
<p>Ill read it.</p>
<p>I’ll read it! :)</p>
<p>I will be more than happy to help you, I also saw you are interested in Wharton; my friend just graduated if you have questions. PM me your essay.</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>
<p>i would like to read it.</p>