Please review my essay? :)

College Essays
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<p>Hi, I am not a very good writer therefore I need someone to check for grammatical mistakes and maybe critique it.</p>

<p>I would be very grateful, thank you.</p>

<p>Topic: Describe any personal circumstances or academic experiences (positive or negative) that you feel are important for us to know about you.</p>

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<p>i dont know if i can give you the right critique but i will love to see it</p>

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<p>Sent, anyone else?</p>

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<p>I will take a look at it.</p>

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<p>Sent ))))))</p>

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<p>PM me and I will try to get it back in 12 hours.........</p>

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<p>thanks, sent</p>