<p>Pls grade my essay, thanks . :)</p>
<p>Basically the topic was based on the prompt : Do people perform better if allowed to do things their own way.</p>
<p>People are more likely to succeed in their various endeavors if allowed to carry out their tasks with full independence. Many people may argue otherwise especially parents in the case of a child. This is because ostensibly having a formulaic or regimented way of doing things is a better option. I strongly believe the reverse holds true. Several examples ranging from history , science and even to music have proved that people perform better at their own pace and using their unique and individual approach.</p>
<p>As can be seen from the history of the American revolution that culminated into the independence of America from the hands of the British colonial masters. The American colonists were ready to go to any length in fighting for the freedom of their country. They would much rather run their country with their own beliefs and unique style. Although the struggle was intense and some lives were lost, the victory gained marked the begininnig of a new dawn in the history of America. The founding fathers then proceeded to frame a constitution with which the country was to function by, considering the interests of the people and also the progress of the nation as a whole. Today after so many years from independence, America stands strong as a nation; More so a nation that is highly regarded even as the most powerful in the whole world. This is surely no mean feat and was achieved only because the founding fathers were opportune to run the country themselves without any external interference from the British.</p>
<p>The story of Ben Carson's separation of the first siamese twins ever separated succesfully also springs to mind. He is a famous surgeon today not only in the field of medicine but throughout the world whereverever his name his mentioned. This is because he managed to perform an operation that was initially considered impossible using the available knowledge and expertise at the time. He was faced with the option of performing the surgery as usual, with only a slight chance of success or abandoning the case altogether. This was an undoubtedly difficult choice to make for him. However after much deliberation he was able to accept the case as he came up with an idea different from the usual, which he believed could be potentially succesful. Fastrward to the post operation and the twins were separated succesfully even when senior doctors were skeptical about his "novel" method. This shows how doing things your way can be aid success among individuals. </p>
<p>After careful analysis of the examples of the American revolution and the story of ben carson . It can be seen that people have a very high chance of succeeding if given the chance to do things their own way, when the converse happens and people are derived of the opportunity , the same results would keep on happening and there would be little progress if any at all.</p>