For future applicants to reference-
Decision: Rejected
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2240 (superscored), 750 M, 800 W, 690 CR
ACT (breakdown): 32 (35 R, 30 E, 32 S, 31 M, 10 Essay)
SAT II: 720 Chem, 610 Math 2, 680 US History
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0
Weighted GPA: 4.24
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): School doesn’t rank
AP (place score in parenthesis): 3 Chem, 4 Spanish Lang, 4 APUSH, 4 English Lang
IB (place score in parenthesis): None
Senior Year Course Load: 4 APs, 1.5 college courses, internship
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): National Merit Commended
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):
J-V Volleyball (9-10)
Stage Crew (11)
Stage Crew Manager (10-12)
Band (concert 9-10, wind ensemble 11-12, pep 9-12, band council 10-12)
Job/Work Experience:
Babysitting/Dog walking/House sitting
Front Desk at a flying club during senior year, 12hrs/week
Volunteer/Community service:
Worked at various science festivals since elementary school
Community service at/through church
Summer Activities:
See above, Music
Essays (rating 1-10, details): Probably pretty good, I wrote about being mixed race and baking as interrelated. I have no real way to rate this. My english teacher and counselor really liked it? Also I thought my supplement was good at the time, but I also wrote about my ideas on freedom which have changed since, so I’d probably cringe if I looked back at it.
Recommendations:
Teacher Rec #1: English teacher (Honors Eng, AP Lit), says I’m one of the best writers in my grade.
Teacher Rec #2: AP Govt/Econ teacher and advisor
Counselor Rec: Pretty good, we have a nice relationship, but she had to write tons of letters
Additional Rec: Chemistry teacher (AP Chem, Lab internship) I’m one of his favorites
Interview: Didn’t get one, should have
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: No
Intended Major: Undecided/Chemistry
State (if domestic applicant): CA
School Type: Public school
Ethnicity: multi
Gender: F
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): Private Pilot
Reflection
Strengths: GPA, essays (my common app ones were pretty darn good, and I put a lot of thought into the Critical Inquiry one), recs, interesting/unusual hobby (flying)
Weaknesses: Test scores, interview probably could’ve gone better
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: Test scores/GPA competitively, I guess just standing out from the pool of really amazing applicants
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected: Accepted at UCI/UCSC/Cal Poly SLO, Waitlisted at Kenyon/UCD
General Comments: I’m kind of bummed, as this is the first rejection, but not too disappointed. Pomona would’ve been really nice to go to, but it is really expensive (so maybe its good I can’t even consider it), and wasn’t my top choice. I’m just nervous because I really want to get into Scripps, and I’m not sure how this rejection might reflect upon that admission decision.
Congratulations to the Pomona Class of 2019!