Possible Common App Essay?

<p>The topic is random about a time at the beach. I tend to be rather verbose and poetic, while using plenty of imagery and other literary devices. I think it captures my voice and tone, while parts of it say something about me. Anyway, I would like some to read it and tell me what you think. If you don't think it would fit, either it is too off the wall or wordy, then I probably will not use it and have to find something else. Anyway, just PM me and I will send it to ya. :)</p>

<p>PM with title/prompt if applicable.</p>

<p>Is verbose ever a good thing?</p>

<p>pm me :] ahaha im very verbose also but there is a 500 word limit -.-</p>

<p>pm me i’d love to read it</p>

<p>pm me it. i have a fetish for critiquing over the top language.</p>

<p>pm me! i’d love to read and try to help :)</p>

<p>ooh! pm me!</p>

<p>You can PM me too.</p>