<p>I figured this is a good way to kill some time before the 10 day countdown. I was speaking to Lansing through private messages and this is a good way to see what others wrote in their applications. </p>
<p>Since nearly all of us have sent in your applications, I don't see any fault on a moral basis that would lead to copying of each others' essays. So I'll go first. Make sure to add the big disclaimer at the beginnign and end of your essay. </p>
<p>!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!If you're going to submit your own, please comment on at least one other person's essay in this thread to keep it alive!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!I will be continously commenting as well.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!</p>
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The half-naked woman stared at me with her perfect teeth, white enough
for a toothpaste commercial. The strangest part wasn't her clothing
(or lack thereof) but the fact that she didn't know she was looking at
me dead in the eye. There's something curious about why it is that all
lawyers' offices insist on being littered with beauty magazines. I
hadn't come here for tips on how to become a better lover; I made an
appointment with Mr. Smith (the names have been changed to protect the
innocent, the guilty, or the simply confused) to have a question
answered. In my mind, there was nothing strange about a teenager
looking to found his own company</essay></p>
<pre><code> Indulge me for a moment as we rewind to the beginning, to what
</code></pre>
<p>factors made me who I am. How far I can kick a ball won't exactly
merit me headline news, and how quickly I can explain how quartiles
function to a dazed statistics student won't land me infamy in
mathematics circles. What I'm certain of, however, is that I refuse to
accept a life of mediocrity and that what I'm destined to do will be
regarded as average, like a movie with too many clichés and a cheap
ending.</p>
<pre><code> When I first arrived in the United States from Brazil, a man told me
</code></pre>
<p>that from the moment I step outside my house I would be prejudged,
criticized, and possibly forgotten and that I could depend only on
myself. I have no fall back plan, no trust fund to support me in case
I fail; there are no connections to facilitate me in finding a
respectable job and no "get out of jail free" card.
When I was 15 years old, I made an oath that I would accept nothing
for free and I would refuse pity due to inadequacy. From that day
forth I have worked two jobs in different industries and several odd
jobs at any given time from systems administrator to sales associate.
I would finance my own car, pay my own bills, and become
self-sufficient in nearly every aspect of the word.</p>
<pre><code> Two years ago I decided that it was time to pay back for what
</code></pre>
<p>opportunities I was given and maybe earn some good karma along the
way. I was tutoring a 14-year-old boy from a local neighborhood as
part of a community outreach program, and I asked him to print an
assignment. He looked at me calmly and said, "How? I don't have a
place to type it." My calling was to do what was in my power to
change these circumstances.</p>
<pre><code> Dedicated to this cause, I would use the proper channels for the
</code></pre>
<p>task. I called the Florida Bar Association and scheduled a free
30-minute consultation with a local lawyer. The plan consisted of
three parts: to become incorporated as a non-profit organization
(under my father's name as executor until I turned 18 years old), to
seek out donations of broken or old computers, and to donate them
refurbished to underprivileged children. With the signature of a
16-year-old boy, Tech Hands, Inc. was created.</p>
<pre><code> I yearn for a place where I'm free to discuss the impact of corporate
</code></pre>
<p>outsourcing or the rising importance of the Chinese language with any
passerby. What truly matters to me is seeking an unforgettable college
experience and the knowledge available in those four years; knowledge
that will help me transform my life into more than sound and fury.
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<p>Cheers!</p>