Read and rate my the common app essay, anyone?

College Essays
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<p>I am an international student from Bosnia with a very low household income ($7000 per annum). At first I wanted to write about the hardships I faced living as a poor and multinational person in Bosnia, but honestly, it's depressing and I didn't want to do a "sob-story". Instead, I described my school day and tried to make it interesting. I think the ad office could probably learn more about me from that than from the essay about hardships. What do you say?</p>

<p>Anyone willing to read it? I really need some constructive criticism! :)</p>

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<p>sure, pm me! i’ll read it</p>

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<p>In the end, I couldn’t fit my school day into 650 w. :slight_smile: I did the hardship essay, but I think I made light of it.</p>

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<p>Thanks Pumpkin96. I’ll pm you in a moment! :)</p>

<p>Anyone else, please? :(</p>

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<p>Ok pm me. But only if u are fine with it, since I am a high school senior and I applied to Universities this year.</p>

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<p>Pozdrav! :slight_smile: I’d be more than happy to read it.</p>