read my college essay purrrty purtyy pleeeasse

<p>i really need help on my college essay from as many people as possible...my english teacher is a tad-bit ditzy, so i want some other feedback on my essay. please reply and i'll PM you my essay as soon as possible....</p>

<p>basically, i tell a story then its impact on me... i'm answering the Common App and USC essay question of the "significant experience and its impact on you".................. it's a pretty powerful story i think, so if u have time to read it, pleeeease reply</p>

<p>i'd apprectiae it thisssssssssss much</p>

<p>ok (10 characters)</p>

<p>10 characters here</p>

<p>I'll read it.</p>

<p>yea i can take a look, i'll see what i can do</p>

<p>what does "10 characters here" mean?</p>

<p>OK!
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<p>anyone else?</p>

<p>lol i'll read it...i just typed that so it'll let me post nvm it was corny</p>

<p>I'd like to read it.</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>sure id love to read it</p>

<p>i thought it was funny looking123</p>

<p>OM me!!!!!!!!!!!!!</p>

<p>o should be a p</p>

<p>lol ditzy eng teacher? ill read it</p>

<p>Send in to me .dude.....</p>

<p>count me in</p>

<p>all riggght</p>