<p>i really need help on my college essay from as many people as possible...my english teacher is a tad-bit ditzy, so i want some other feedback on my essay. please reply and i'll PM you my essay as soon as possible....</p>
<p>basically, i tell a story then its impact on me... i'm answering the Common App and USC essay question of the "significant experience and its impact on you".................. it's a pretty powerful story i think, so if u have time to read it, pleeeease reply</p>