<p>Here's the prompt:</p>
<p>In the space provided, please write a concise narrative in which you describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and how it will affect your college experience or your contribution to the campus community.</p>
<p>If you are interested in reading it, I will PM you the essay its self.</p>
<p>A name used will be blanked for privacy, and it is a little over the word count. Any ideas on where to cut back and how to improve it would be great. :)</p>
<p>Thanks so much!</p>