<p>I'd like for some of you guys on here to take a look at my essay and tell me what you think. First time I took a stab at i. Be as harsh as you'd like.
"Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story."</p>
<p>Note it is 661 words, I will need to cut some down to 650.</p>
<p>PM me for the essay</p>
<p>i’d be happy to read it! </p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>Sign me up. I can be very harsh though. </p>
<p>I would be happy to read it!</p>
<p>Id be happy to help if you need it.</p>
<p>I’d love to read it!! I tend to be very nitpicky so don’t get offended. </p>
<p>In training to be a writing tutor and I would love to help you . </p>
<p>I’ll read it </p>
<p>Sure I will be happy to read it OP. Be careful of sending it to to many people though, or people that only have a few posts or haven’t graduated HS though. I’m not saying this will happen, but a week or so ago, we had someone’s essay stolen because they had it PM’d to a 1 post user on CC.</p>
<p>I’ll take a gander</p>
<p>I’d be willing to look at it</p>