<p>It's the supplemental essay for a school I'm applying to. I'll PM you the question as well; if you know which school it is, you win some props from me. </p>
<p>I'm also going to blot out my last name, just for security purposes. It shouldn't be too crazy. </p>
<p>I am willing to take any and all criticisms as long as they are constructive. Do your worst.</p>
<p>ok, pm it over</p>
<p>yeah I can read it.</p>
<p>ToHarvard-Ihope: I hope you liked my essay. I'm changing it, yea, but still. Not cool.</p>
<p>I would love to read it pm me</p>
<p>I'll read if you still want more feedback. PM if you like.</p>
<p>Hey enderkin! I saw your chance thread a long time ago. I'd like to read your essay, if you don't mind. Just interested in how far you've gone in the college app process. Would you be able to look over mine too? Thanks!</p>
<p>Hello! I would like to read it pm me thanx.</p>
<p>I'd be happy to look over it. Shoot me a PM.</p>
<p>I'll take a look.</p>
<p>Gotta redo it--most of you will get PM'd by the end of this weekend.</p>
<p>I'd love to read it. Just PM me.</p>
<p>I wanna check PM me</p>
<p>I'll take a look and critique it for you! Just PM me</p>