<p>I concocted this essay late one night the day before I was supposed to give it to my english teacher. This essay is for my common app. It is the topic of my choice. I really like it, but I realize that it can be vastly improved. It is 650 words, but I have had some people telling me to add more because they enjoyed it that much. Others have characterized it is too long. I just need some honest oppinions. Feel free to rip it apart. If you want to read it just leave a message on this thread.</p>
<p>Sure, send it to me.</p>
<p>send it over..!</p>
<p>Interesting topic, I think you can make it work but as you said, it does need polishing. Best of luck!</p>
<p>sure, just pm it!</p>
<p>Sure PM it to me ... but in return can you "rip apart" one of my essays as well? It's good to help each other out ... I just really hate it when someone checks my essay and says, "eh It's pretty good." I really like it when someone scrawls huge red marks on my essay.</p>
<p>"I really like it when someone scrawls huge red marks on my essay."
Lol kinky..</p>
<p>Anyways, I'd like to see this out of the box essay and give some feedback.</p>