Read my Personal Statement!

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>I finished my 2 personal statements for UC's (one will most likely be used for Common App too) a while ago and have spent these past couple weeks revising and trying to finalize it.</p>

<p>I would like a couple opinions/comments on my essays. First of all, I would like to know if I closely followed the prompt. Also, if my personality is evident throughout the essay, if the subjects I chose to write about were interesting, and if grammar/punctuation/diction is good. </p>

<p>Please let me know if you would kindly be willing to read and scrutinize my essays and I'll DM you them. Thanks!</p>

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<p>I wouldn’t mind giving it a look. :)</p>

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<p>I would be willing to read yours! Let me know if you are interested in reading mine too - I’m looking for some constructive criticism. :)</p>

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<p>I’d love to read them :)</p>

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<p>I’d read it as well</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>i can read it</p>