<p>Ok this is really not that good of an essay, I'm not even sure if I will be able to do much with what I did, I didn't seem to stay on-topic in my opinion, and didn't really answer the question. Anyway, if anyone is interested in reading it just comment and I'll pm you.</p>
<p>pm me,let's see what you got.</p>
<p>any last minute readers? much appreciated and needed. I want criticism.</p>
<p>Send it my way, I'll take a look</p>
<p>If you don't think you stayed on topic, chances are you didn't. And that needs to be fixed, obviously. Answering the question precisely is less important, because the questions are sort of open-ended, but make sure it deals with the themes involved.
I have to tell you I'm a junior in high school right now, but if you can trust someone new, I'd love to read it.</p>
<p>I'll take a look.</p>