<p>In one of my admissions essay I talk about something that I haven't told any of my friends or family members yet so I really can't go to them for like a peer review, I would reall appreciate it if someone could critique it for me.</p>
<p>And I also have one other less revealing essay If you don't mind critiquing that also.</p>
<p>:) thanks in advance</p>
<p>I’m happy to help. Paste it into a private message and send it over if you like.</p>
<p>i’ll have a look too, if you want.</p>
<p>Happy to edit. <a href=“mailto:jrapp@sas.upenn.edu”>jrapp@sas.upenn.edu</a></p>
<p><a href="mailto:ironicallyunsure@gmail.com">ironicallyunsure@gmail.com</a> if you want</p>
<p>I was top 5% in both my writing classes. I wrote a very passionate personal statement for my common application. </p>
<p>Let me know if you need help. You can PM me or email at <a href="mailto:Essenar@gmail.com">Essenar@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>I showed nobody my essay (which took a year to write) because it was personal and I’m still waiting on the admission decision, but when I get in I’ll be living proof that having other people revise your statement is not necessary for good writers. Don’t second guess yourself if you happen to be a good writer. Other peoples opinions may help you write a sound argument, but they may also take away from the pure is-ness of you. The best revisions are the ones that you do yourself, over and over again.</p>
<p>thanks for your responses guys!</p>
<p>vintij, I wish I could just rely on myself for essay revision, but I’m not confident enough in my writing skills to do that. But good for you and I hope that you get into your school! :D</p>
<p>I could help you, submitted all applications already.</p>
<p>PM it to me too. is this a transfer essay? or are you in HS?</p>
<p>Pm me as well, I’m intrigued!</p>