Rip me to shreds...

College Essays
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<p>Really! I need someone to be horribly mean! I need someone to edit my Common App essay one last time before I turn it in. I'm not very good at punctuation (semicolons, colons, extra commas, etc...ugh!), and it would be great to have an extra set of eyes rip it apart. </p>

<p>Don't worry, it's not about my grandparents dying or "the big game." I tried to just write an honest piece about a time I went snowboarding.</p>

<p>If anyone's willing to help out, I would be so grateful!</p>

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<p>PM me and I’ll take a look at it.</p>

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<p>I’m only in High School, but I can look at it if you want me to.</p>

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<p>Thank you so much! If anyone else is willing, I’ll PM a copy of my updated essay. A little less editing each time is needed! ;)</p>

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<p>I’ll take a crack at it :)</p>

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<p>Thank you! PM sent!</p>

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<p>If anyone else is willing, I can PM it right away =)</p>

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<p>Bump…can you tell I’m anxious ;)</p>

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<p>sure send it over</p>