<p>So I left this one a little late. It's an interesting topic, I think it just needs to be polished a little bit. It's pretty specific, so everyone who's not a Stanford applicant and also an aspiring Pixar worker is welcome to read.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>P.S. I'd be happy to swap with you if you have something you'd like critiqued.</p>
<p>I'm going to be turning in my SCEA Stanford app soon, but I was wondering if you wanted to swap roommate essays? Just curious to see the different angles people decided to write this essay.</p>
<p>Sure, I'll swap with you. I'm not really worried, unless you have an older brother you shared a room with, a younger sister, and some very specific hobbies of mine, lol.</p>
<p>im applying this year too.
wanna swap?</p>
<p>I'm not applying to Stanford, so if you'd like to swap your roommate essay for my Carnegie Mellon "Why CMU? Why your major?" essay I'd be happy to read over it for you.</p>
<p>Hey guys, I just submitted, so thanks, but I don't need any more readers. I'd still be happy to read yours though, if you want. I'm not applying to CMU.</p>