<p>I'm taking the test in 2 days and i suck at writing essays. Im ok on the MC. For starters i cant right very vast (legibly), even if i were to write constantly i wouldnt be able to do more than 400 words. I also make stupid mistakes because i have to rush to write anything. Sometimes i just blank on what to write. </p>
<p>Heres a sample essay i wrote,
"Money cannot buy happiness."</p>
<p>Money is something which is prized in society. It is thought money gives power and happiness. I know from experience the latter is not true.
One summer I decided that I wanted, needed, lots of money and cool gadgets. I would not be happy until I had enough money to buy a new bike, TV, and computer. So, I got a job at a local grocery store. I soon found it would take me far too long to accumulate the amount of money I desired. I decided to get another job at a retail store.
Between my two jobs I worked 10 hour days 6 days a week. For the first two weeks of working, I relished in the amount of money I was making. I bought a new TV to reward myself.
The third week of was not so fun. I did not mind the work, but missed such pleasantries as going to the movies with my friends. I also hardly saw my family anymore, as my parents worked night shifts. I continued working another two weeks before I finally quit.
I was not happy with my money. Sure I had my new TV a new bike, but I lost what was truly dear to me; my family and friends. I learnt money cannot buy happiness. </p>
<p>I realize all the mistakes made, but dont seem to be able to avoid them with the time limit. Someone please give me some advice. Feel free to comment on and grade the essay.</p>