Scared that my Common App Main Essay is too boring

<p>So.. I have read plenty of other people's essays before and they're all very... creative. I didn't want to be like that and so I took the old-school route of writing an essay. It's not completely boring but I had a serious tone most of the time. You'll understand when you read my essay. Anyone here willing to go through it and give me comments if it's fine or not?</p>

<p>p.s. I'm a new poster so I cannot pm yet!</p>

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