Check out the personal essay of this student, who was accepted at the University of Michigan - Ann Arbor. https://insights.collegeconfidential.com/winning-umich-essay
That essay brought a smile to my face too. Well done!
Of professional quality.
Nice job.
Charming. Just look at what comes through about her that adcoms can like, see the traits. (Try it.)
When I talk about “personal, unique and interesting” for essays, this is it.
Might of added “Go Blue”… Lol ?
Very nice essay.