<p>I would be very grateful if someone could give me feedback on my University of Michigan essay! </p>
<p>I wrote it just after submitting my UChicago application (known for whacky/creative essays), so it seems rather "bland" to me even though the admissions committee is not expecting applicants to write anything crazy. </p>
<p>I am above the middle 50% stats wise, so that is not something I am concerned with, but I just want to make sure this is adequate enough. Thank you! </p>