i have to write some stuff in the mid year report for UVA. please proofread it for any suggestions. thank you
My senior year has definitely been the best year in high school so far. Academically, I have received the best grades in 4 years. As stated above, I earned 6 As and 1 B. However, the most encouraging fact is that I have done so well in AP level classes. These grades have assured me that I will do very well in college. My cumulative GPA has also boosted fairly due to my performance this year. I scored quite well on the SAT II writing and Math IIc tests. I have registered about 40 hours of community service as as a camp in guide at the Science Museum of Virginia every two weeks. In retrospect, I am really proud of my accomplishments this year and I am very sure that I will be able to achieve such excellence in college as well.
<p>well, it depends on the question that was asked...but it is good to let them know that you are doing better than ever...that will secure their opinion of you.</p>
<p>it just says that "if thers anything else u would like us to consider since you sent in the application, please write in the back"</p>
<p>oh, then it's good~</p>
<p>I like. You seem so confident, and you seem like you know what you want to do with your life. I love it.</p>
<p>hmm.. really? i didnt think it was all that great. i just came up with it in 5 mins... I was also thinking of wriiting something presumptous in the end... like " i expect a fat letter from you in April" ... should i say that. I will word it differently, but u get the implication.</p>
<p>no, you'll come off as overly confident...bad idea. I think you want to come off as I am ready for college, not I'm getting in, just don't forget to send me the envelope.</p>