<p>Okay, I promise this will be the last time I ask for reviewers on here - I've had about five different Common App essays, but I feel like I'm going to stick with this one and just keep editing it.</p>
<p>Anyway, I have two essays I'd like to get opinions on: my kind of quirky main Common App essay (prompt 1) and my "Why ___?" type question for Vassar, which I'm applying ED to. I don't care if you're also an applicant for this year, but I'll only send to trusted, high-post-count members. Let me know if you're interested in reviewing one or both. Thank you all so, so much in advance, and thanks for dealing with my constant whining about writer's block :)</p>