Train Ride to Maturity: Part II

College Essays
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<p>Hello fellas,</p>

<p>Well the time has finally come. I've completed my common app essay and am having an incredibly hard time deciding if it's "me". I've spoken to many people about the essay and some say it is fantastic and others say scrap it. I'm really stuck in a pickle. I personally love the essay and think it is the best I can do. My essay is very unique - to the point where it is causing some to be confused. I'm not sure if it is so different that I might be taking a risk.</p>

<p>If anyone here would be willing to read the essay I would be incredibly grateful. </p>

<p>Thanks,
UVAorBust</p>

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<p>hey i would love to read it! and also, are you still reciprocating like you said in your previous thread? if you are, i have an essay for you lol</p>

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<p>sent 10char</p>

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<p>Anyone else give it a go?</p>

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<p>I remember you! Congrats on your ACT score. I would love to help, but we’re both 2014ers :[</p>