<p>For some reason or another, I'm having trouble with the supplements that ask questions like "Why X" or "Why This Program?" </p>
<p>I'm working on one for Georgetown right now, asking me to "Briefly describe the factors that have influenced your interest in studying business."</p>
<p>After about a dozen tries, I feel like I've got something that answers this question well ... would anyone mind taking a look at it? I'm not completely done with it - I have to relate it back to myself now, but I'd like to make sure I'm on the right track.</p>