<p>Got an Early! </p>
<p>Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2120 (690CR, 710M, 720CR, 10E), didn’t send but it’s on my transcript
ACT: 34 (all 34 except reading 33 and Englisg+Essay=35, 12 essay)
SAT II: lol I didn’t send, and this wasn’t on my transcript, but 710 lit and 750 Math I. Yes, Math One.
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): probably like 3.96 we only send in weighted.
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 1/227
AP (place score in parenthesis): 33444555
IB (place score in parenthesis): lol my school is mediocre we don’t have IB
Senior Year Course Load: physics (no AP/Honors available), AP Stats, APUSH, AP Lit, band (and yes, that’s the hardest courseload possible for me – I’ve literally taken all the AP classes we have to offer)
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): some NHD stuff at the national level, NMF, whatever AP scholar, some smaller state-wide awards that I won’t name (but you could totally figure out who I am if you have great internet skillzzz)</p>
<p>Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): band – symphonic, pep, community, et al (section leader, principal clarinet), literary anthology (editor in chief), debate (captain)
Job/Work Experience: nope
Volunteer/Community service: not that I mentioned
Summer Activities: NHD a couple of years, travelling a couple of years. I don’t think this is even asked on the app.
Essays (rating 1-10, details): BECAUSE I CAN TOTALLY QUANTITATIVELY JUDGE MY OWN WRITING AND PUT IT ON A SCALE OF 1-10. I talk about the community of band, and say have the word “saliva” be a symbol of familiarity. It’s a fun CA essay, but could be perceived as kind of elementary. I wrote it in like 3 days because I felt that my original CA essay didn’t really reflect me as well and I wanted parental feedback and I did not want to show my parents my 1st CA essay. My Why Swarthmore supplement was ripped off of an essay I wrote for the Midd Diversity program in like 2 hrs (although I really do think it suits Swarth better than it did for Midd). My life experiences essay basically is a “Why I’m diverse and completely unique YOU’LL NEVER FIND ANYONE LIKE ME,” more eloquently than that, of course. Of course, it does have basis, and I do have a pretty unique story.
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
Teacher Rec #1: idk man I read some of one teacher rec (she made no effort to hide it from me when I was helping her with computer stuff) and it seems good I guess
Teacher Rec #2: I saw her start to fill in the bubbles on CA, and I can attest that they’re not straight down top 1%s.
Counselor Rec: straight down top 1%s, probably generic because he has to write a bajillion of them. But for all I could know, it could be a literary masterpiece. But probably generic.
Additional Rec: nope
Interview: nope </p>
<p>Other
State (if domestic applicant): HI
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: mediocre public
Ethnicity: Golden Oreo, Twinkie, some other metaphor representing white and Asian.
Gender: XX
Income Bracket: it’s need blind. This doesn’t matter in admissions. They didn’t even get my IDOC until today. We live comfortably, but not luxuriously. The best way I can describe this is that one year, we went on vacation to Paris because my mom had a conference there, and then our 4-person family lived in a 2-person apartment and took the metro exclusively. Went to the Louvre on the night discount. Bread and cheese for lunch. We didn’t go up the Eiffel Tower because it was expensive and my mom hates heights.
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): my dazzling personality repels boys. I guess you could call that a super power. But in actuality, the closest thing I have is my story of intellectual growth and of diversity. Being from HI doesn’t hurt.</p>
<p>Reflection
Strengths: My personality. Wait, no, definitely not my personality. All self-deprecation aside, I have geographic diversity, good stats, and a cool story on my side.
Weaknesses: race, I got some 3s on AP tests, not having straight-down 1%s on every rec, my volunteering is laughable, my SAT looks mediocre, I’m not 1st gen, and URM,
Why you think you were accepted: Honestly, geographic diversity. Swarthmore and other LACs aren’t very well known here, so their HI pool is slim pickings. What confuses me is this: I applied to DiscoSwat, and got rejected. I used nearly the same essay in my Swarthmore supplement. I literally changed like 5 sentences to make it sound a little less cliche. And now I’m in. I’m not complaining though, I’m incredibly happy to have gotten in now, because now’s the time that actually matters.
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected: Accepted into: Alabama (NMF scholarship), University of Pittsburgh (full tuition), Maryland (one of the Banneker/Key levels), Wellesley (Likely on early evaluation), Bowdoin (diversity admit, I presume, because all early writes seemed to be for diversity), Vanderbilt (MOSAIC diversity early write). Waiting on HYPS, Columbia, Amherst, Carleton, Colby. Deferred SCEA Yale. </p>
<p>AYYYYY YEEEEEEEEE I’m so much luckier than I thought I’d be. I use Parchment and it said I have like an 18% chance of getting in. The first thing I said when I opened the mail was “haha (in a really sassy voice) suck it, Parchment.” This is super freaking awesome, though. I never thought that I’d get into Swarthmore, and I’m hoping that this translates to more good news in the next 2 weeks. </p>
<p>I’m guessing most/all of you guys were invited to the fly-in in late April? I’m really going to try to make it because I didn’t get to go to DiscoSwat and I want to get out of the island, and I can’t go to the Bowdoin one because of a scheduling conflict. (Also I really want to know how Swarthmore is.)</p>