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<p>I'm starting to write my essay and I'm wondering if someone can take a look at it to see if it reveals personality and what kind of person I am. It hasn't been corrected really, I just want to see if its a legitimate candidate to use. Not even sure if I can use it because it's such a random topic. </p>

<p>BTW, applying Penn ED. Please don't ask to see if it if you don't have that many posts. Sorry, but I just don't think it's a good idea.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>I'll help you out. :) I'm done with college apps. And I'll edit/give feedback.</p>

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<p>i'll take a read as well.</p>

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<p>I'll look it over</p>

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<p>I'll look it at</p>

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<p>i'd be glad to read your essay and suggest some changes/revisions :)</p>

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<p>i'll look at it</p>

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<p>PM me please..</p>

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<p>pm me as well</p>

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<p>"Please don't ask to see if it if you don't have that many posts. Sorry, but I just don't think it's a good idea."</p>

<p>nevermind, im pretty new to CC</p>

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<p>I don't know how much of an help I would be, but I'd also be interested in reading it (if you don't mind).</p>

<p>Really, if you don't want to, it's ok.</p>

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<p>I'll give some comments if you want to PM it to me</p>

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<p>I'll help you out...
PM me.</p>

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<p>I'll read it too</p>

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<p>I'd be happy to look at it, I just graduated HS and am heading to my college of choice next year.</p>

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<p>I'll help as long as I don't have to correct mechanics</p>

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<p>I'll look at it</p>

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<p>PM me <3
thx</p>