<p>Hello, I need some Judges to look at my essay and give me their opinion pliz. Anyone??
Also I come from Senegal west Africa, I have a 1380/2400 SAT I and I am applying to U Penn fall 2009!
:)
pliz read my essay!</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you see this post in time I guess. I’ve already sent in my app, but I can understand if you don’t trust me… lol. Seriously, give me a pm if you want a look-over :l</p>
<p>I was accepted ED. I’ll read and critique it if you want.</p>
<p>Congrats Westmere.
“but I can understand if you don’t trust me”>> Really? how can?
Thank you to both of you!</p>
<p>how can what lol. I was just saying that if you don’t believe I already sent in my app, you don’t have to pm me your essay.</p>
<p>Why don`t I have to ? If you want to take a glance you are welcome! :)</p>
<p>Sure. Just PM it to me when you are done.</p>
<p>There’s a fine line between optimism and foolishness.</p>
<p>Acceptd, I’m not sure why you consistently have a negative, elitist attitude. But that’s ok, you won’t fall behind because of that attitude. You’ll fall behind because of your inability to differentiate between optimism and foolishness.</p>
<p>I know of seven people from West Africa with a lower SAT score than yours at Penn. Good luck.</p>
<p>I agree, Acceptd always seems to be a debbie downer in these threads. lol. That said, feel free to private message me, i am not applying to Penn, i am going for more of southern ivies.</p>
<p>I’ll read it too, if you want me to 
(Already sent in my app.)</p>
<p>I’ll read it too if it’s not too late. Feel free to pm it to me.</p>
<p>acceptd got OWNED</p>
<p>Oh actually I am quite desperate but by hearing I am believing I have a piece of chance as small as it is right?</p>
<p>i love people who chase dreams!!!..seeing as im one of them ; )…and ive caught my “immpossible” dreams quite a few times = ) …iv applied RD for penn…pm me…and ill give u my opinion on your essay</p>
<p>i got accepted ED
id be happy to read your essay and offer input just pm me
and i agree with souly “i love people who chase dreams!!!”
i chased mine and look wat happened :]</p>
<p>haha totally…i remember seeing this video of Amy Guttman talking to a bunch of high schoolers…and she was asking them what was important to be succesful in college…and the kids kept saying the usual stuff…–work hard, study, blah blah…and im like yelling in my head…DREAM!!..and she finally says …“dream big”…nice little moment = )</p>
<p>Souly, Penngrl09, I think you are right to stick to your dream! BECAUSE I GOT into Rose-Hulman institute of technology! i AM SO tHRILLED AND EXCITED!</p>
<p>This completely answers the fact that score are not everything.!!!
Waiting for Penn RD hopefully!</p>