transfer essay

<p>new to the forums so hopefully anyone can ask for essay help here, judging by the other posts looks like im good but sorry if im wrong.</p>

<p>this is my second essay that i have written, tossed my first one because i thought it was to generic. wanted to convey something more personal, just hope i have enough about me and how i have overcome in this essay.</p>

<p>thanks if you can help.</p>

<p>Bump</p>

<p>wow, after re-reading that post I should do some more explaining about it since I wrote that kind of quickly before I went to bed at 3:00 in the morning.</p>

<p>I have one essay that I currently feel would be great to submit. A good amount of people have read over it and it flows really well but I feel it is to generic. After reading a lot of posts I feel like this one would be just another “one of those” essays</p>

<p>Last night I wrote out a more personal essay, something really from the heart. I haven’t had as much time to edit it but I not that I have thought about it, I am wondering even if this would be a essay I should turn into admissions or not.</p>

<p>If I could get some help with deciding which essay to chose and possibly any formatting and grammar changes, I would greatly appreciate any time that someone has. Thank you.</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll look them over.</p>