I wrote an essay about how I think about “constructing” my conversations for one of the UC essays like a tennis point (What would you say is your greatest talent or skill?). I describe how I do it, then say I was previously shy and had to reform some cultural things (like making eye contact when talking) and conclude my greatest skill today is the ability to converse and how I developed it over time.
I think my other essays are great… but this one seems a little off to me. Opinions? Scrap it or perfect it?