<p>Hi Guys,</p>
<p>I was wondering if these are okay for the essays.</p>
<p>Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>
<p>*I would be talking about my parents. My mom was an immigrant and didn't go to college but she has a decent job. On the other hand, my dad was born in U.S. and went to college. He now has a decent job too. I would compare my parents and talk about being successful.
*Also, I would be talking about my future job as an accountant. My two cousins who one is currently striving but does not seem to like accounting, and another cousin who is successful at the moment.</p>
<p>Do you guys think they are the same? ...</p>
<p>Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>
<p>*I wanted to talk about my talent which is piano. I have been doing it since Kindergarten. I'm currently at level nine. I asked my mom when i was young if i could learn piano. Since middle school, I have always hated piano. But my mom is very strict and wouldn't let me quit. I would say the benefits of not quitting and the lesson I learned from my mom.</p>
<p>Feedback please?
Thanks.</p>
<p>Sorry if some grammar are wrong, summer is taking a toll haha.</p>