<p>I am a mechanical engineering student at University of Iowa. Today I was informed that my engineering transfer application was denied, and I gave the admissions office a call.</p>
<p>The reasons for denial:</p>
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<li>Low high school GPA (3.39)</li>
<li>Not enough technical courses during first semester.</li>
</ol>
<p>For their first reason, I had a 3.73 college GPA. So I'm wondering why they ignored the jump from high school 3.39 to college 3.73.</p>
<p>For their second reason, I took Principle of Chem I, Engineering Math I (Calc 1 and parts of Calc 2), Rhetoric, and Engineering Problem Solving I (transfers as General Engineering 101).</p>
<p>This semester I'm taking Engineering Math II (second half of calc 2 and most of calc 3), Engineering Math III (Matrix Algebra), Physics I, Statics, and Engineering Problem Solving II (intro to programming).</p>
<p>I'm not sure how to write an appeal essay that addresses those two complaints.</p>
<p>On a side note, UIUC admissions stated that they care mostly about GPA, and seemed to give the impression that they don't really care about engineering extracurricular activities (such as SAE Baja or Engineering Without Borders), or research/internship.</p>
<p>But I also want a research position or internship at my current university. Many of the HR recruiters stated they don't really care about GPA and prefer strong demonstration of project/teamwork skills in engineering extracurricular activities.</p>
<p>Given my heavy coursework, I can either get high GPA for a future transfer to UIUC, or continue being heavily involved with various engineering organizations which I enjoy doing and would help me get an internship.</p>